Coriolanus Act 1 Characterization
The political tragedy, “Coriolanus,”
composed by William Shakespeare, develops in its characterization of various
characters, especially when concerning the main one, Caius Martius, later
bestowed with the title of victory, Coriolanus. Therein lies a larger purpose
by the technique in which Shakespeare establishes the character traits of
Coriolanus, in act 1, including developing the plot, foreshadowing future
conflicts, all the while fitting into the genre of a political tragedy. This is
initiated by commencing the plot in the midst of conflict, wherein the tension
in the 1st scene of the play enables the characters to directly
characterize Coriolanus, depicting him in a negative light. This elevated
situation, in which the audience, or readers are thrust into, permits them to
comprehend Coriolanus’s vengeful and hasty stance and additionally, foretells a
possible future conflict that Coriolanus might face with the plebeians
(commoners). Contrastingly, throughout act 1, an opposite stance of
Coriolanus’s traits are established, namely when concerning Coriolanus’s mother
and his unacceptance to beg for votes and accept the prize over his victory of
the war. His nobility and leadership associated on the battlefield contrasts
with the initial portrayal of Coriolanus, shifting the audience’s perspective
from considering him as domineering to sympathizing with him. For example, in
Scene 9, Coriolanus displays humility about the victory stating that it was
just his duty, making him more popular with the people. His appreciation for
his service and the nobility he associates with it is reflected when he claims:
I have done
As you have done; that’s what I can;
induced
As you have been; that’s for my country:
He that has but effected his good will
Hath overta’en mine act (I.ⅸ.18-22).
This
is further stipulated when concerning Volumnia, Coriolanus’s mom, who is
extremely blunt and has an overbearing attitude. The fact that Volumnia claims
that if her son was her husband, she would rather have him out in battle,
rather than in bed with her, enables the audience to empathize with Coriolanus,
effectively portraying him in a lowlier light. The purpose of Shakespeare doing
so is very apparent, as it allows the audience to resonate with Coriolanus and his
tragic flaws, from a different approach, that of a political play. This is
highlighted by the shift in setting, that being the battlefield and the city
capitol. Coriolanus is a blunt warrior, impatient with foolishness, only
considering those who fight for Rome as deserving of riches. This is
established early on in the play and is evident through his actions and diction
on the battlefield, however, by the plot developing into him being elected for
consul in the capitol, it requires Coriolanus to be a people’s person, someone
who is humble and meek. This required shift in character serves as a surprise
to the audience, who are able to sense a conflict developing, by the sheer fact
that they already have established Coriolanus’s personality. Shakespeare then conveys
the idea that military ability does not succeed in the absence of citizenry
approval and is deliberately orchestrated by him, so that the play runs
smoothly, with the brink of conflict left in the balance.
Good job! The concept of "Volumnia claims......enables the audience to empathize with Coriolanus, effectively portraying him in a lowlier light." is an impressive observation. One thing you did really well was relating the genre to the purpose of characterization. I think you could improve by providing specific quotes from the play.
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